A strange smell like no other. The furniture in my room is quite tight. Describe The Room Your In Describe the room you are in Dark, empty and cool; I gaze ahead at the room before me, with only the sound of the air conditioner thrumming. I have heaps of ski gear but I dont really have anywhere to put it so even if I do clean my room, my ski gear normally stays on the floor. Pretty good if only you could see how i see your bedroom. oh lick that creamy cock, Below you will understand what is important, the idea provides one of the links with an exciting site: . Until you see that my little carpet paradise is surrounded by pile of mess. A retreat is usually thought of as somewhere thats relaxing and calm. Behind the door is a yellow, green and red stacker box with Jacksons toys in it. 4+. The place that I hang out in, do homework and well of course, sleep. My bedroom is small but everything fits in it. Good work a nice peace of writing. This answers first letter of which starts with S and can be found at the end of Y. It is a very modern bedroom, with a tropical theme. My bedroom, a place of comfort and rest. There is the skull of the first Tahr I have shot which gives you a clear indication that I like hunting. Next my colours that live in by bedroom let me think, oh yea beige and blue. Ruebens bedroom It was interesting to learn about some of her feelings about her private space. It used to be a spare room and I moved into it a couple of years ago. I also enjoy the posters in my room, they describe who I am inspired by and what I also like. Your punctuation is really good, but you are missing a few commas and had some capital letters missing. like how you have used brackets. The biggest most horrifically untidy thing about my room is the floor. You only had three simple senses that were not very detailed and I think you could have added more detail about the noise and smell and sight in your room. Your writing is very descriptive. You have described your room well and I can paint a picture. My bed takes up about one quarter of my room and is stationed next to the northern wall of my room. Just above my table are shelves were put things like books and trophies. There is also a collection of photographs Ive taken in both Australia and New Zealand which is great because this ties together my two main cultures, these photos are surrendering my window and hanging above my desk. There are green curtains in my room that catch your eyes. The colors that are used are light sea blue, grey and black. It is a king single and it has a wooden front and back board. The drawers hold all my hair ties, my sunglasses and headphones and stationary. Some names needed capitals. If you were to say that your office was your home, you would be saying that youre always at the office! We usually waste power by turning on the lights just so we can see properly. I have all my electronics are sitting next to my bed charging like my computer and my phone and ipad . I also have bright dots that include the colours of light and bright pink, a turquoise dark and light and yellow. The movie is about a family trying to save their home (their castle) from developers who are trying to forcibly take it off them. Your lucky that it's big haha 4. Also my carpet is brown. Decorations fill the room with topics, happiness, colours and hobbies. My floor isnt actually that colorful but because there are heaps of clothes everywhere you cant tell how boring colour is. They make their stories real by allowing us to experience The bed is the main part of any bedroom because that's where everyone spends the most time. But one thing that you could work on with your punctuation is how much you used. 4+. In your writing I have noticed that you need to improve the proper use of functuation. Tattoo Aftercare Saniderm, Good story I enjoyed reading it. 3, Great description Hayden, you forgot to mention the constant piles of washing in it! All I can see is clothes all over my floor dirty plates on my bed side table. Now my bedroom has amazing accessories such as the the useful charger plug built into the wall! My walls are white with dark wooden paneling. Great descriptive writing Christopher, you went deep into a lot of detail about your living space and colours. Quite an old room perhaps. Overall I think my room is an amazing space and deserves a lot more love and cleaning to keep it in peak condition. I like my room the way it is because I love the view and how it is laid out. Most of the punctuation was good but there were a few mistakes like writing the word twice. Thorntons Bedroom Description My walls are light blue and my ceiling is white. When you walk into my room you will see famous NBA (National Basketball Administration) players, such as Kobe Bryant, Michael Jordan and Allen Iverson it's like my gold to my treasure box. When you walk into my bedroom you will see three different colours starting at the entrance and going all the way through the room. On one of the walls, near the corner is a little round painting of a light blue owl from my hometown Raglan along with another small, colourful painting of the words I love you. it can be a beach theme a sky theme or whatever I can come up with. (Her eyes were beautiful.) Very detailed story and I loved the descriptive vocabulary you used in it (words like alcove). Lastly is the layout. You just need to open up your curtains more to get the better light. the spelling was great and I really enjoyed reading the of writing you worked on. There might even be a ball stuck between the TV and wall. You could improve on adding more ideas and making them a bit more interesting. I like it. I like the part when you recognise that your room needs cleaning and organise your things to feel much comfortable but most of all you are comfortable in your room. Now you can go to your room and make it the way you want it and design it the way you like it. I can count around 30 pieces of paper, old, stray certificates, none used or cared for. Beside the desk, in pride of place, is my single bed. I have a couple of lamps hidden around the room so when its dark it makes this cool effect. On the other side of my bed, sits the divider that holds all of my well-loved books and DVDs. The ceilings are high and have a wooden trim around the perimeter of the room. My bed sits in the very middle of the room, while my large dresser, containing all of my clothes, is tucked in beside it. I almost feel bad for the things that have slided down the back and not found until the layout of my room changes. My favourite was the accessories it was funny. The accessories are the things I think help make my room unique. I liked some of the words you used like; zooming, convenient and belongings. I love the way it looks and I wouldnt change it and thats the way I like it! It's the one spot in the house where it's completely designed by me. There is also a bit a sporty feel because of all the sports gear. You used the right punctuation in the right places and I didn't see any mistakes. Its so messy that you think if you close one eye and squint, you might have thought you were at the dump yard. The sun shines in my room which makes my room warm up. You could work on the adjectives but otherwise very good. If I got to change my room I wouldnt change it because I think my room is the best for me and I like it just the way it is. The carpet is a soft grey colour with a squishy texture. The furniture in my room fits nicely with my double bed in the corner by my door, my bedside table beside that, my desk in the corner beside the windows and my chair beside my wardrobe. In the middle of my room up against the feature wall is my bed, its a Queen Double, with white outlines of hexagons and a grey background for my duvet and pillows. So when you walk into my room on your right will be my bed facing you with a bedside table for my books, clock and a light for reading. Posted on: dinsdag,3 Its a big room, but when shared and halved, the stomping grounds are rather small, which also means little mess in little space looks like big mess. I would also like change the style of my bedroom, mostly the size. Then you notice the two untidy desks slightly to the right of my dresser. A very well written and descriptive piece. It is also nice to curl up with a book or bask in the afternoon sun. Most of my accessories are very modern as same are made out of glass or clay. There is a similar popular simile that means the same thing: my home looks like a bomb hit it. My room is average but not like an average kids bedroom, my room is very organised where all my clothes go. In my room I have fairy lights these are to brighten the room up at night. as your room! Finally is my headset it is a turtlebeach recon 60P with a black base and a cool funky design on the base. That is why I think my bedroom is the best place in the house. So my bed is messy, but in general my room isnt all that messy. It feels warm in the morning because of the natural light that comes streaming in and in the afternoon it feels cold caused by the sun moving to the other side of the house. It also has jumps for my motorbike but you cant really see them because they are covered over with grass since I dont go on them much anymore. Although I could make a change as I would like a desk where I could do my work. Beware of the wardrobe if you go underneath it something is bound to fall on your head or all my stuff will avalanche out. Because Romeo doesnt use the words "like" or "as," this line is a metaphor. This layout works really well for me. your paragraphs were formed well. Other than using my bedroom for sleeping I use it for quiet time, keeping up with what's on social media and sometimes doing my homework. The entranceway to my room holds a flowery scene: crocheted poppies and daffodils blu-tacked to their places, accompanying a daisy-shaped doorbell. There is a big black shoebox beside my bed which fits all my shoes in it. I am happy that I have a couch in my room it helps my back I dont know how but it does, sometimes it's easy to fall asleep on it after a long day of work. On my right hand side wall as you walk in there are my bright football posters, my flag poster and my Crusaders flag. There are loads of different earrings dangling off of a metal sheet, which is shaped into a dog. Thanks for dropping by. I think that my room is pretty cool because I have it all to myself and I have a lot of stuff in it, the carpet is pretty cool aswell. Overall, well done Teatukura! How long will the footprints on the moon last? So, a swamp is a perfect place for them to live. In my family you don't get much down time, from playing sport to hanging with friends, so it's good to do nothing. MY BEDROOM Out my east facing window you can see the black and white calves frolicking through the lush green grass in the paddock and the different coloured cars zooming down Thompsons Track. The lighting has no difference from 7:00am to 1:00pm. For next time you could work on not repeating ideas in each paragraph. I raced around the corner and opened the door to my bedroom. I think it is awesome you describe things in you bedroom so well and I saw it so clear in my head. But I would like to get rid of the hole and change the wallpaper, also I want a tv. The mirror is directly in line with my bed so it was scary when I had just watched a horror movie about the urban legend Bloody Mary and had to go to sleep. My mini drawers has three drawers on top of each other with the middle one being slightly longer than the others. I need to make sure the cloths are not on my desk they need to be in my dresser or in my closet. Bed, Desk Drawers and bean bag are most of the furniture in the room, the double bed's too big for the room the there is the desk the desk is big wooden and has my docking station and all of my accessories on it, then there is the beanbag the bean bag is lodged in between he bed and the desk it doesn't get used much i only really put my school bag on it but i still think that it's a cool thing to have in the room. Lots of descriptive words and nouns and adjectives make for interesting writing and make it really easy to read. This crossword clue Metaphor for a messy room was discovered last seen in the April 25 2022 at the USA Today Crossword. I give a 4. My walls are plain white and the carpet is a nice, soft contrasting dark colour. I have no clothes draws sitting around in my room because my wardrobe is large enough to store everything in. Firstly, the furniture. My room was and old garage and now it is a room that has an olden day look, but still feels like a modern room. Reuben has provided a spot on description of his room. Then a little bit more right you will see a king size bed with a star wars duvay cover and black pillows. I have loads of different accessories in my bedroom. The theme is pretty bare with a white paint job on the wall and across with chandeliers with lights that can be dimmed or brightened. I would probably just proofread your work before submitting it. I suck creamy cock. Continue useing very good punctuation and spelling. My desk is a white desk and is placed against the back of the room to give a feeling that the colors are spaced out. No i have to go and clean up my room. Here, theyre using comparison (that a vault is hard to get into, just like the home), but instead of saying like a vault, theyre saying is a vault, for literary effect. The odours of the room could be smelt from the kitchen. So, if you referred to your home as a retreat, you would be saying that your home is a peaceful place to escape from the world belong. All of the furniture is pretty old for example the punk bed is about five years old and the dresser is about eight but its still in good condition. Personally I love my bedroom. I like how you described your mum telling you to clean your room all the time haha. I think you need to work on use of commas and apostrophes, some of them are not needed. I like how big my room is because its a good size for me to just lay on the ground and play on my devices or read. Around the neck itself I keep my karate belts, white, orange, yellow and purple. Then, you were talking about how the home had turned into a place of work. My room has a hint of rotten food in it to make sure my sister will stay out and it has smelly clothes all over the floor. It feels like an environment that I like to be in. The style of your room to me is a dark and bright theme with all the colours and design. -3, Brody, I like your writing. Love the story love the writer the use of strong, adventurous adjectives eg horrifically untidy, musty, unfresh, and colour descriptions eg bright red, light, creamy, dark coloured are great. Did you use a dictionary?If not Excellent spelling. Clothes stuffed half in and half hanging out of the draws. So my bedroom might be small, but for now its just way I want it. My bedroom is just the way I like it. My favorite thing in my bedroom is my drums they are blue and black but look purple in the light. Above my desk there is my mini basketball hoop with my mini basketball in it. Secondly, the accessories. The final piece of furniture is a tall drawer set, which contains five drawers worth of clothing. Your mother might say this if they come home and see that youve left all your toys lying out. This is where I do my homework. The scary closet. It has a flexible neck which can turn about 160 degrees, as well as being able to slightly tilt up and down. The size is a king single. Is your bedroom like mine dirty and smelly. Below the small window on the left is a nice, lush white desk with a lot of my belongings lying on top. At the foot of my bed there is a built in wardrobe with lots of clothes and at the foot of my sisters bed theres the entrance to the room and the door to the en suite. On the left behind the wall, you can see a lot of lego and a few book and also a bean bag. You used interesting words that I haven't heard of before. It lies to the left of the monitor on the desk and is covered with old homework and empty cups. Shoes and clothes that I was too lazy to put back in draws in a bunch on the floor in front of it. September 2014. But all of this is because the entire house is new, in fact it's not even finished!, although with all these bonuses I don't go into my bedroom that often. You did'n't go into detail about your furniture we don't know what patterns or colours they are. My bedroom layout includes two sets of windows, both made with with grey aluminium and double glazed glass. You can imagine a mother of 3 or 4 children calling her home a zoo. The layout and space in my room is the most important thing in my room to me. LOGANS BEDROOM It's not really the best looking room because it's really messy and has light pink wallpaper. 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